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Training Pokemon

For a while I have read over all the cut and paste concepts on the Pokemon world trying to make the host strong as well as his Pokemon using the gamer system. I understand it's a dangerous world and you want to give the MC extra plot Armour. I thought about this and realized that the host would rarely fight in matters that needed strength except in situations that dealt with Legendaries. If that becomes par for course though in the story. What's the point of making this a long term novel that deals with the growth of a character. I would've set this as a short novel that deals with an overpowered MC that one shots all situations that need it. Also I wish to point out that Pokémon have sentience. The world also has abundant food with berries being around and the things that happen in Pokedex's in the games, I'm gonna try to stay partially away from as this is rated at a rating lower than 18+. (That's mostly because I find cursing unnecessarily to be just plain bad etiquette. I can understand if it happens when something bad occurs and you can't control your mouth. But flippant use of them just to annoy people is just that. Annoying...) The original story is also about friendship, journeying, and finding a purpose in the world they're in with their friends. Sabrina, Dawn, and May deal with contests. While Ash, and Iris love battling. Brock even finds a purpose on his journey as a breeder fully going into the field instead of just pursuing it as a side hobby like before when he had to take care of his brothers. As such I find it, while not useless for writing. A complete disappointment and withdrawal from the nature of what this world represents. What with hope and friendship being these main parts, and if you're fighting every creature you meet into submission. How is it possible for you to truly bond beyond servant and subject. Another thing is inside this story I will not limit the host to having 6 Pokemon on his being. No this would only apply to gyms or competitions as these kinds of things would require a more formal structure. I have decided on a new idea for this system that instead focuses on the Pokemon themselves. This includes knowledge, buffs, items and so on. The system will be less of a RPG stat layout directly as this still exists. But the stats come from training with the other stuff like others would train in a real world. The exception being Buffs. He can also use the system to build a utopia for his Pokemon. He can even slow down the time inside to gain larger training time later on for specific species which grow slower like Ninetails or various Ghost Pokemon. Enough of this Synopsis and rant though and on to the story. Ps. It's obvious, but I don't own this image. So I take no credit for it. And if someone eventually would like to make an image for this story I will thank you. Sincerely. PPS: Comments help me keep my want to write. When I notice there's not a lot of comments. I second guess my writing, like a lot. Probably for a good reason as I know I like to over analyze things, and I KNOW that's gonna influence my writing. I can see it deeply ingrained. So if you guys like my style please comment.

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Chapter 26-Overlord Of Species

Walking down the road to the gym I wondered over what Ash had been though. He should have faced the normal league already. Putting the question to the side as something not important for the moment I thought of the other Growing Earth I collected.

Other than what I had gave away I had 361 days worth of items. Thinking for a second I decided to just sell it all, and buy some Op skill or skills. It had been a dream of mine to do so since I had gained this system. After all who doesn't want a cheat like ability. The System detecting my intention to sell finally finished the calculation of cash.

"Congratulations host you have gained 1,805 system points. What does the host wish to buy."

Immediately I went to the search bar for anything costing 1,500 system points. The high amount of points had gone to my head making me spend happy. Then I came upon the Classic skill I had.

"Charmander/Charmelion/Charizard Mayhem- While using a Charmander/Charmelion/Charizard all attacks are passively empowered to be 5% faster."

Maybe instead of buying a super I would create a super ability. First using 50 Points it upgraded to be 10% faster. Then using 100 Points I made the passive 25% faster. Smiling I pressed again for 250 points for 50% then 500 for 100%.

"Charmander/Charmelion/Charizard Mayhem 5- While using a Charmander/Charmelion/Charizard all attacks are passively empowered to be 100% faster."

Looking at my other abilities I decided to go buy another one I had, had my eye on long ago.

"Burns Hurt- Burn Effects completed by your Pokemon will last 5% longer. Cost 10 Points."

Buying this I then upgraded it for 25, 50, 100, and 250 points. This left me with 470 points left to use as well as the new perk at stage 5. This perk would make sure the burn effect on a Pokemon would be left 100% longer.

Giving a smile I wondered to myself what to do next. Then I had an idea that I needed to voice "hey system do you know if it is possible to buy Pokemon from the system."

"Yes host it is possible, but it is unadvised, unless you wish to buy a Pokemon species not of this world."

Thinking over something for a second I decided to ask about something else "System is it possible to invent a Pokemon and then have it created." Waiting for a second I started to get worried before it all disappeared into joy with a "yes, that's correct host," from the system. Taking a second to breath as hard as I could to clear my thoughts I knew for my own health I just had to try it out once. "System can you take me to the screen to create a Pokemon?" With a whooshing sound I was gone completely from the plane of the Pokeverse.

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Looking around the spot a mew came out of nowhere trying to figure out where I went. With a shrug it dissipated back into the forest. In another place I popped existed. Looking around me I was in a bit of awe at the scene before me. I was surrounded by numerous uncountable number's of Pokemon. Taking my eyes off it I looked into the center of the place where a machine was set allowing me to model a organism.

"System what I want to do is create a new evolutionary option for Charmanders," I spoke with certainty. Then a Charmander appeared on the stage. Looking at it I used my mind to imagine a Charmeleon. Slowly the creature morphed into it showing what the evolution would look like normally, then I started to change Charmeleon into what I wanted. I moved the tail flame to be located in several points inside the body. This seemed to give the creature a slight glow to it's being.

Now my partner wouldn't need to be as afraid of water. It would also give a special Ability to the species. Fire Touch- Any being who hits the target has a chance of receiving a burn. This ability would take advantage of the perks I had gained. Going to the Arms I slightly protruded the arm increasing its length ever so slightly to give it hardened areas that would harden any elbow hits so it could give more damage to it's targets.

Afterwards I changed the color scheme into a combination of black with red throughout the body of the creature in various places. Finally I placed a Design in Dark Burnt Orange of a Dragon Roaring straight onto it's chest. Now the species looked like a king of wars. I had created this species for my partner, but I would first let him chose whether to take on this appearance or not. I left the Largest surprise however of all for my Partner if he agreed to it. Deciding that my Idea was good I walked away and yelled out "Finished." Taking a couple of seconds I was back in my world looking around then the world shook.

"250 coins have been used. The new species Karmeleons are now a possible evolution, and have been updated as a law of this world allowing all Charmeleons and Charmanders the chance to evolve into this species. After today however Charmeleons individually will no longer have this ability."

Then world wide panic began. A new species emerged at once over running the planet with it's new idea of power. It was a Pokemon with 4 types Fire, Fighting, Ghost, and Dragon. To keep the balance of the world in check all of it's weaknesses were classified by it's first two typings Fire and Fighting.

Thanks Kolehmanni for the wonderful Title.

Yeah I have now revised this one.

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