Junior_elder
interesting story and nice characters though character descriptions are somewhat lacking and i think as a new book it's better to have quick release at first so you could gain support after the reader know the story better and get hooked up with it but as it is now the first readers might give up halfway.
It's an interesting novel, Young Master novel have been the trend Nowadays and this novel hasn't really used The Young Master trope very Much But it's still a good read in my opinion, you should give it a try. The writing style can be confusing a little at the start but it gets better. And well what more can I say with just 14 chaps. Hmmmm..... Nothing much on World Building so far afterall in 1st person novel the depiction revolves around the MC.