Reviews of This FF has a lot of issues so it being rewritten with a new plot
This FF has a lot of issues so it being rewritten with a new plot
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One of the best iseas, having 2 best friends As narUto and sasuke. But after that, it just goes down hill. their “perks” were too overpowered. aLready at the age Of 7, they are strong enough to defeat Kage legels or at least are near kage levels. On top of that they get wishes. A good story is something that challenges the main characters. But In this sTory, there is no challenges. narUto has everything he could ask. same goes for sasuke. way to fix this is By removing the power ups. make susUke awaken hIs Sharingen because NaRuto Or his family was in danger. make kyubu like in original but with less hate compared to original because naruto would always talk with him. If ur goal is to have a story of 20 chapters, yea this could work. but i dont think thats ur goal because u choose naruto as ur world. For a long term story, Have real life challenges thrown at mcs. so they can be retable. otherwise , it just becOmes super boring after chapter 4, in my case and even then, i skipped some paraGraph because it diDnt make sense. background charavters are super weird too. they feel like nps and mcs feel like npcs with better ai.
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