Rini_10
Overall, Loved your work. The Beginning is quite intriguing and keeps the reader in check. I won't reduce the stars for some casual and common typos. Another thing I have noted is that the chapters are quite short. I understand your problem when it comes to creating work. It is really easy to have ideas but executing them is some otherworld boss level quest. AGAIN. I loved your chapters and you are seeming to be improving the wordings and your length slowly. Keep it up. kudosđ„ł