AshryverArcheron
Ok let me get straight to the point. I really like this. And Harry Potter fans brace yourself but I don't love Harry Potter. I've read and enjoyed the books and I laugh at the occasional hp meme I find but I'm no die hard fan. But I really like this one, it doesn't really feel like I'm reading the Harry Potter books but it does feel like I'm back at Hogwarts. The idea for the story was an amazing one. I can't wait to read more about Nick and Isabella.
I'd like for the characters to be fleshed out a bit more, in six pages it seemed like a scramble to get to Hogwarts and a rush to get her sorted. I'd like to see what happens in the future because few things bring me more joy than harry potter oc's. So far so good, I think it'll get better now that we're positioned we're she wants us. :)
This is a good story. It does not deviate too much from the world of Harry Potter, but has the feel of as different storyline and characters. I hope it continues. I think isabella is a nice character, but maybe the author could put her in something out of her comfort zone to show the reader exactly what kind of person she is.