I'd like for the characters to be fleshed out a bit more, in six pages it seemed like a scramble to get to Hogwarts and a rush to get her sorted. I'd like to see what happens in the future because few things bring me more joy than harry potter oc's. So far so good, I think it'll get better now that we're positioned we're she wants us. :)
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