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Ceritanya ga akan kemana mana karena mc selalu menghindari masa lah yang tak perlu dihindari sebenarya (mc nya g pernah kena masalah jadi ceritanya akan stagnan biasa aja jadi plot nya tak pernah begulir dan jadi mc nya akan terus hidup sebagai pemburu sampai dia mati) jika ingin membaca ini kalian akan cepat bosan juga mc terlaluh pasif padahal dia memiliki kekuatan op
The writing quality is average for this site (so, understandable, yet riddled with grammar issues) The stability of updates is rather good. 10 chapters in 12 days as of writing this review The story development is ok. There are only 10 chapters to base it on as of writing this review. The only major criticism I can say is that the story is rather slow paced The character design is where the major problem lies with this story. The MC is an immature, idiotic chuuni. In a normal isekai this might be okay, depending on your tastes. But this is Game of Thrones. This type of show and this type of character just don't mesh well. The world background is ok. It's a fanfiction, so the world background is somewhat predetermined. Though I have to say the author did start in a relatively unknown city in the books (Qohor), and thus was able to add some unique situations and characters
I'm really really not good at writing a review so all I'm going to say is this this is an interesting premise first chapter is cringe but the second two are good please continue mr. Author P S like I said I'm not good at writing a review so....sorry if I don't come off as enthusiastic it's actually good I really do want to see it continue and will give Powers stones for chapter