Gnaipafe
Drama or the story is great. The first chapter could be said a nice start because there is a touch of mystery. I like how it starts as a movie. For the plot, it is kinda scary and good at the same time. Update, updating two times a day so I can say it's great and more points added for you to read. Character design, not much to say, it's good too. World background, the place where the story happening isn't that high so it is easy to imagine, which is also great... Quality of writing, nothing much, maybe just pay more attention as there are times where small mistakes happening... Like misspelled, however, it isn't a bug prob so it's okay too... I just want to say to the author to continue the hard work... Thanks for the book...
I had goosebumps after reading the first chapter. I've sensed and felt a lot of suspense and mystery. The author has gone to great lengths to ensure that the terms she uses are accurate. I strongly recommend this book as an enjoyable and great read! I'm looking forward to more chapters, and I hope you continue to upload, dear author!
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I have read all the way to the latest chapter (chapter 7) without me realising because thats how good it is for me!! well done author for having the ability to get me instantly hooked into your world and read your story. it is def worth reading as every chapter is a page turner for me. (as i said, i didnt1 realised ive read it to the end). i wish you all the best and may the spirity spirit guides you to success 😍😍😍❤❤
the premise is interesting, like REALLY mysterious. i would have suggested to say that 5 people in POV is very difficult to manage but from the skill of this writer i think author can pull it off. i dont know if this is romance or not but hopefully you can pull that off as well me loves romance. Also the action, mystery and horror (if it is one). Im fine with the description not too over the top which can get boring real quick. and i wanna suggest to author to watch vampire knight anime. it had vampires and night classes in it i think you will get something from there. weeeee good luck for spirity ❤
So one thing I feel should be worked on with this novel is description and also dialogue Most times I get confused over who is talking and also the dialogue feels unnatural in some places Pretty cool synopsis which gives off the aura of an entertaining plot tho but the story leaves a lot to be desired Anyways, good luck author and I hope my review helps ☺️