Thanks for chap

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Yandere Yandere Yandere Yandere Yandere I Am Not a Loli-Con I Am Not A Loli-Con I Am Not a Loli-Con I Am Not a Loli-Con I Am Not a Loli-Con Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem

Thank you for the chapter

This short, but good work

Good chap

Nice chap. Thanks

Wow. Good work

Nice start

Saw it on MTL... Reviewed by AvEReGeNP. A monster reincarnation novel where characters feel like a bit reasonable than other similar setting novel. Interaction towards the world and other characters seems more rationale albeit there being some flaws. Reasonable decision making, thoughtful of others, able to differentiate between good and evil, non aggressive & non egotistical. Edit: After Chapter around 120 there is a shift in tone and it seems some other other author took over? MC becomes irrational and becomes exact opposite of what I wrote before the edit. It felt like reading a similar generic novel, 'The Crimson Dragon'. In fact don't take my words take authors. He himself wrote at the end that he lost control at some point and didn't enjoy writing this novel anymore. Here is what he wrote, (mtl version) (I believe the lost control part was around chapter 120? After that point its pointless with random development that spring out of nowhere and all the other BS. I just skimmed through the rest of the chapters in about a hour or 2 and finished it. So much potential wasted... sigh)

A bit vague... Maybe add some commas

Eh?

Next already...

Yanderes Yanderes Yanderes Yanderes Tsundere Tsundere Tsundere Tsundere I Am Not Loli Con I Am Not Loli Con I M NoT Lo Li Con, But If There Is Why Now? Hahaha!

Thanks for the chapter

Drama or the story is great. The first chapter could be said a nice start because there is a touch of mystery. I like how it starts as a movie. For the plot, it is kinda scary and good at the same time. Update, updating two times a day so I can say it's great and more points added for you to read. Character design, not much to say, it's good too. World background, the place where the story happening isn't that high so it is easy to imagine, which is also great... Quality of writing, nothing much, maybe just pay more attention as there are times where small mistakes happening... Like misspelled, however, it isn't a bug prob so it's okay too... I just want to say to the author to continue the hard work... Thanks for the book...

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I don't understand too hahaha

heads again hahaha

me head? My head? Idk