Nice start đ First chapter gives a good introduction to the characters and a nice set up to the introductory arc. My one grievance is you use single quotes and double quote marks the opposite way to most people, but it's not especially wrong to do so. Anyway, good job! đ
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Well, no problems for the beginning so I'm giving a
full score, if it turns out badly will just update the score đđ»
Take my 5 star as a support for a nicely written beginning with good grammar.
This story is so good, first chapter and i'm seeing a LOT of potential.
I just know that when the story develops, it's going to be phenomenal, that's just how much i believe in my friend Tuggie :D
so proud of you, mate.
moral support all the way
What is going on?!?!?!? Why are the same few people going to every original and putting one star down. Are they just trying to get all their competition down? I don't want to be assumptive, but it seems really shady.