Review Detail of Millman97 in The Uprising of Han Jian

Item: The Uprising of Han Jian
Rating: 5

Review detail

Millman97Lv116yrMillman97

Nice start 👏 First chapter gives a good introduction to the characters and a nice set up to the introductory arc. My one grievance is you use single quotes and double quote marks the opposite way to most people, but it's not especially wrong to do so. Anyway, good job! 😁

The Uprising of Han Jian

Tugster

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MiyaLv10Miya

millman, must you always be an editor at heart. you don't even have a badge to prove yourself no more

6yr

Millman97Lv11Millman97

I think I've been fired but they forgot to tell me 😰

Miya:millman, must you always be an editor at heart. you don't even have a badge to prove yourself no more

6yr

MiyaLv10Miya

oh no, maybe you should start thinking about plan b

Millman97:I think I've been fired but they forgot to tell me 😰

6yr

Millman97Lv11Millman97

My plan b is a bottle of bleach, is that what you really want? 😰

Miya:oh no, maybe you should start thinking about plan b

6yr

MiyaLv10Miya

*replace the bleach with a chocolate chip cookie* i was thinking more like maybe you can start publishing your original works on here, but the bottle of bleach works too. just don't ingest it, it was not made to be eaten.

Millman97:My plan b is a bottle of bleach, is that what you really want? 😰

6yr

Millman97Lv11Millman97

Too late 🤢

Miya:*replace the bleach with a chocolate chip cookie* i was thinking more like maybe you can start publishing your original works on here, but the bottle of bleach works too. just don't ingest it, it was not made to be eaten.

6yr

MiyaLv10Miya

so does it taste good?

Millman97:Too late 🤢

6yr

Millman97Lv11Millman97

😵

Miya:so does it taste good?

6yr

TugsterAuthorTugster

I changed the quotation marks!😄

6yr

Millman97Lv11Millman97

Cool 👌

Tugster:I changed the quotation marks!😄

6yr