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Okay.... Apart from some bad grammatical errors here and there, the book's premise is very interesting. But I think the chapter where the MC died doesn't give me a vivid image of the scene... (I can't understand where the bullets sprayed at her came from.) The author releases chapters steadily, and that's great. Good job.
The first chapters are captivating and intriguing. However,as we dont know much about the character at the beginning of the book it is hard to sympathize with her but we do feel an attachment as the book progresses. A nicely written story with a good pace, recommended for anyone who enjoys that type of stories
From reading the first chapter, its a bit difficult for me because the protagonist is female and its natural hard for me to relate to a female protagonist as I'm a man, however it presented a good amount of info just in the first chapter, and held and interesting cliffhanger. Not my particular cup of tea, but I think it's still good. The only issue is the grammatical errors, but its understandable if english is not the Author's first language