From reading the first chapter, its a bit difficult for me because the protagonist is female and its natural hard for me to relate to a female protagonist as I'm a man, however it presented a good amount of info just in the first chapter, and held and interesting cliffhanger. Not my particular cup of tea, but I think it's still good. The only issue is the grammatical errors, but its understandable if english is not the Author's first language
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