priya012
I really like this book its one of the best on this Webnoval app the author takes a new epoch on MMORPG and system from what I have seen so far the quality of English is very good all most no mistake the character have a real feeling to them the update are all ways on time if not author make up for it this what got so far from the 14 chapter I have reed so far plz reed and vote for this noval its really interesting
Honestly, you had me hooked from the start. The MC isn't an idiot, he acts his age, and the world building is great. I love your writing style, and how things are progressing in the book. I can't wait until you can update more than 1 chap a week. Truly, the potential of this book is on par with Supreme Magus, Legendary Mechanic, and Rise of the Undead Legion, 3 of my favorite books on here.
From what I read, which is only 9 chapters, this is gonna be a great book. For now, the main character actually acts his age which a lot of reincarnation or go back in time book don’t do. His motivations and actions match up, and the forshadowing is done well. The book seems to be going at a good pace (at least in my opinion) and the story has a reason for the main character to remember so much of the past. I highly recommend this book to anyone reading this.
Some minor grammatical issues. The pace of uploads is a little slow. Otherwise, I wouldn't have anything to complain about. If the author can manage to upload a new chapter every two days, I believe that this novel would get a lot more fervent readers. I hope that the author can upload new chapters more frequently.
Have a wonderful story.. Great myth and full of beauty name of ancient legend.. Translation was comfortable to read.. Story was interesting.. World buinding wonderful but maybe will need a lot of time if there no time skip story.. Tragic story.. But MC got second chance.. I hope this will not became long story that forgotten the initial goal.. I hope this story will end before 1000 chapter.. Good luck.. God bless you