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Black_sheep_2mthCommentedi accept that excuse, first it's a peaceful world , he has no real need to be on edge, the plot needs to move on and we don't want a Batman in modern family fan fic. and it's a modern family fanfic
(AN: I've read some comments about why Zephyr's not always aware of his surroundings even though he's basically a pseudo-Batman, so I'll explain my train of thought. Batman was always aware of his surrounding because he HAD to. He lived in Gotham. A city where someone like the Joker, the Riddler or Scarecrow could attack at any time. As if that wasn't enough, you had people like Amanda Waller and Lex Luthor outside of Gotham. In comparison, Zephyr lives in suburban California so there's no need for him to always be aware of his surroundings.)- Black_sheep_2mthCommented
who tf uses inches in math class ??
Alex nodded and re-stated her answer, "5 inches". - Black_sheep_4mthCommentedCh 48 Insurrection and the Lady in Red
- Black_sheep_4mthCommentedCh 458 Chapter 458: How Can You Bear It
- Black_sheep_5mthReplied to AA_ZEUS_SKYTHUNDER07- Loona - Helluva Boss
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ummmm, dragons maybe ???
After thinking it through repeatedly, Victor thought this possibility to be quite ridiculous. Why would Varys save Elia's and Rhaegar's son and not announce this to his allies? Why should he rather push up Daenarys, a raped woman, towards the iron throne, instead of a male heir with half the blood of Dorne, that could gather many more powerful allies and troops to win back the iron throne? - Black_sheep_5mthReplied to 7rox
yeah, while this development has potential, those theories and conclusions seems a little forced
These three inconsistencies with Varys' story led Victor to believe that there must be something wrong with the whole story and character of Varys himself. - Black_sheep_5mthCommented
spelling mistake, need a space before 'i'
"You demon! Ugh! You're seriously a monster! How could I ever be attracted to you?!" Taylor complained seriously. I then leaned forward and flirted, "But you are turned on right now aren't you?" - Black_sheep_5mthCommented
it's around 89 k.g, (for those who live in civilized society)
One doesn't throw a fourteen stone woman on a bed, especially not with the quality of mattresses used by most of Westeros, so she slid down my front before I stepped over to the end table and began oiling up my cock . - Black_sheep_6mthCommentedEven the Ravenclaws that bullied her stopped after they kept getting mysteriously cursed in their own common rooms. On an unrelated matter, Harry was getting really good at modifying spells to only act after a certain delay.
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bruh, check spelling
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bruh
This paragraph has been deleted. - Black_sheep_6mthCommentedCh 11 The Crust
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The world lacks any real development the story is ok I think, The story is way too immature in the writing style . so not my cup of tea, way too much Japanese anime influence in the writing style. and most shit happening in the story is with an mc is of 6 years old .and honestly it's way too unrealistic . anyway that's my opinion on this
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bruh using Japanese words in an English novel is the epitome of cringe, it doesn't sound as cool as you think when you were writing this,
"Heh!! Baka!!" - Black_sheep_6mthReplied to Zero616Ch 20 Chapter 20
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would you consider not cutting the chaps ??, it's fine even if it's once a week update aslong as it's longer chapters
This concludes today's chapter. I decided not to cut it further (the previous chapter was part of this one) and to continue writing. The next chapter will likely be uploaded this Tuesday, and it will be shorter, around 1.5k-2k words. - Black_sheep_6mthReplied to Endless_Starlight
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Turning slowly with me, House said with an annoyed smile, "Now, kid, if I hadn't given you my word, I'd have the hundred dollars Cuddy owes me, the hundred I won from Cameron, the three hundred I snatched from Foreman, and the six hundred I got from Wilson." After thinking for a moment, he added, "That's what you get in this hospital: you learn medicine through practice and earn money you don't have to declare. Here you only win," he finished, winking strangely.