Sweacer
Among the best R-18 system novel you can find on this site. My only issue is Narrative which is MC's POV all the time as it feels MC explaining things which he can't even feel, in one chapter he was explaining feelings of his sister in a serious manner, kinda weird so please try to add another POV as POV chapters can help in extending story and spice up the thinks as narrative is skewed in different direction. And Please add more strength in Conquest of girls as it attach reader to a character like Manga the world god only knows.
My rating might seem low. that doesnβt mean i donβt enjoy the novel more than 3.6 though. But as many other novels there are things to improve uppn. This is more of review directed towards the writer. I like this novel alot but i wish we got to know more information upon this world, the background make it seem more alive. Thereβs nothing wrong with trying a chapter or two. Just don,t stray too far from what some of us keep reading for. Quite a meaningless review but i always enjoy women in novels that has a bit more depth. cheers and keep going strong author. iβll stay and see how much you improve.
Well, everything is about ***. The author can do well writing script for **** movies but as a novelist, his imagination and storytelling skill is pretty dismal. No subtlety, no logic, nothing. Everything is just "conveniently" placed or add-on for the sake of prolonging the story, well, if you consider fucking, fucking, and more fucking as a 'story' at all, that is. Nice try with the spam fake reviews too. Too bad it's too obvious.
This is one of the best +18 story I've read here. Totally worth it. The author is really giving their best. The chapter is long enough. The writing is quite good even though there's some mistakes (which I don't really mind). It's not just sx. It has a good plot. Sx+magic, what else do you need, right?