Among the best R-18 system novel you can find on this site. My only issue is Narrative which is MC's POV all the time as it feels MC explaining things which he can't even feel, in one chapter he was explaining feelings of his sister in a serious manner, kinda weird so please try to add another POV as POV chapters can help in extending story and spice up the thinks as narrative is skewed in different direction. And Please add more strength in Conquest of girls as it attach reader to a character like Manga the world god only knows.
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