Hello, I am the author. I would just like to say thank you to everyone who read this story. I hope you enjoyed the story and continue reading it. I don't think I'm going to stop until I finish it!
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hello ... first its interesting ... second i like it ... but.... please put life in the story . dialogue and other characters in .. what you are doing now is narrating like a scripture don't be hasty and build ur story
You skip a lot of stuff in the story and sone of the things the mc does s very unrealistic, like staying in a basement fr 5 years in the middle of a war. Still, though your story has great potential.