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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey8mth
    Posted

    5 star from me .... hope u continue .. from what i read . i feel like i am reading a script .. u should add some life to the scene dont leave it to our imagination

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    Fast and Furious: Life
    Movies · Deaus3
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey1yr
    Commented

    As I said be4 fights that the mc is not involved in gets boring also this is a ff not a manga so .......

    Ch 52 Chapter 52 Sakumo's Counterattack
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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
    Anime & Comics · Navy_King
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey1yr
    Commented

    a fight last for more than one chapter for other than mc gets boring so watch out btw beautiful ff

    Ch 46 Chapter 50 Third Exam
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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
    Anime & Comics · Navy_King
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey2yr
    Commented

    didn't read it

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    Tower of God. Faal Rahgol Zhaoga
    Anime & Comics · Ferasight
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey2yr
    Commented
    Ch 21 Kentaro, The Farmer
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    The Shinobi With The Straw Hat
    Anime & Comics · LanceVance
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey2yr
    Commented

    just don't make him overpower without a weakness .. leave a room for the future . or u r gonna burn too soon

    Ch 18 Madara Uchiha!(1)
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    The Shinobi With The Straw Hat
    Anime & Comics · LanceVance
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey2yr
    Commented

    slow down the story man you are going to run out of ideas soon also start putting conversation in it and put some life in the story

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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey2yr
    Commented

    so far i like it ... just don't rush the story build it and make ur own story

    Ch 7 First Kill
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    In Naruto with the power of One Piece.
    Anime & Comics · Coolnerd
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey2yr
    Commented

    a nice start so far keep up ...................

    Ch 2 2) Guy and Duy
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    In Naruto with the power of One Piece.
    Anime & Comics · Coolnerd
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey2yr
    Posted

    i dont know how to write a review for this one .. all i see till now is we have a really long prologue .. also u need to put some life in the story.. interaction between ppl and mc .. also shorten other character pov .. that is my opinion thou

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    V for Vampire
    Anime & Comics · valient_vicky
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey2yr
    Commented

    just a reminder u always mix up between ( to ) and ( too ) its confusing

    "Too be forever slaves to them, Made too watch over them" Lucian says too raze.
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    Immortal monster
    Movies · Obito_Black
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey2yr
    Posted

    hello ... first of all the idea is good , update is good and character is good BUT .. why should i read it ? u r sticking to the original story .so what is there for me ?.. u should make ur own story in the world of 1 piece dont follow the original

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    The Shinobi of Straw Hats
    Anime & Comics · PeekACoo
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey3yr
    Commented

    it should be his end not he's

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    Reborn as a Mikaelson.
    TV · Uchiha_Lover21
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey3yr
    Posted

    its been a while since i enjoyed reading a ff .. i really like it a lot 5 from me in every thing and all i can say to the author is thank you really for writing and sharing it with us

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    Fairy Tail - A Courageous Journey
    Anime & Comics · McNiels
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey3yr
    Commented

    thx for the new chapter .. but that is too much filler

    Ch 53 Demon King Finale.
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    Red-Eyed. Devil.(Hiatus).
    Video Games · ClearSkySage
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey3yr
    Commented

    thx for the chapter .. but if i may could u plz tone down the other point of view

    Ch 26 Chapter 26:
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    Naruto: Of Bone and Ice
    Anime & Comics · Lavalord115
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey3yr
    Commented

    its ur ff do whatever u like

    Ch 49 Ending Danzo
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    Naruto: Reborn As An Inuzuka... Kinda?
    Anime & Comics · WooingTheStars
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey3yr
    Commented

    nice one keep up the good work thank u for sharing it with us

    Ch 24 Chapter 24
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    Naruto: Of Bone and Ice
    Anime & Comics · Lavalord115
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey3yr
    Posted

    first i love this one . i enjoy reading it need faster update but that is my wishful thinking its ur right to update whenever u can or want just one request plz keep making it interesting by doing some changes to the main naruto story

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    Naruto: Of Bone and Ice
    Anime & Comics · Lavalord115
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  • aboshwkey
    aboshwkey3yr
    Commented

    nice job with ur story so far . i like it alot

    Ch 82 To the Konohagakure
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    Hard to reincarnate into world of naruto as Iwa shinobi
    Anime & Comics · dragon_guy
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