XianPiete
I'm only on ch 13, but so far I'm truly impressed with this story. I simply can't believe it took me so long to find it. I swear webnovel just loves hiding these great stories, trying to shove mediocre mary sue stories and awful generic Chinese translations down our throats instead. So far the writing quality is great. A few typos here and there, but everything is easily understood. No complaints. Writing stability is disgusting. 11ch per week speaks for itself! Please make sure to rest author!! So far the story development is good. Problems aren't solved instantly, and the opposition is trying to get it's way against the mc. Basically it's not an "everything falls in place" sort of story, which is really a good thing. Character design is pretty good so far. The MC is pretty good and knows how to rely on her subordinates. Some things seem a bit easy in how she picks up subordinates, but over all its ok. It's way too early to really tell with respect to world background. However, from what I have seen so far it's pretty promising. All in all, this story deserves waayyyy more exposure than it currently has. You can bet your britches that I will be throwing all my power stones into this bad boy for a while. I can't wait till the SO is introduced!!
I don’t write a lot of reviews but this one deserves it. All I can say is what a story thus far, it has everything you could ask for funny,sad, anger, on the edge the your seat. Keep up the hard work and I hope this story blows up because I feel that it is already better then release that witch. But that’s just my opinion.