I hope you give Rowan credit for the Blood Fruit. So far all her accomplishment have been given to others. I would like for her to be at least known outside of Hogwarts. What better way to get more protection from say death eaters to have the backing and gratitude of the Vampires.

it'd more like kindred spirits found each other.

it's how you get a demon of the mist Zabuza.

Have you consider moving this story to patron or making it into a kindle book. I think it is good enough to do so.

One of the best Cultivator novel so far. It has not fallen into a lot of the trappings that most of the genre has. A the characters feel alive into the story.

I was hoping Freya was with her wolf wife Kelyn they were great together.

I love that he is making moves to get talented people that can help him. I hope he also get people from the other races and women that were talent at the time. He may approach Malcom x at some point or Mária Telkes. So was brilliant and was head of Solar energy. He can have both oil and Solar energy. He can even secure some part of Africa with the help of Malcom to get their resources in a fair price.

I want Freya with her wolf lover Kelin from the Original. They were a cute couple.

mother Terisa was a monster in life. If you don't buy the propaganda buildup by the church and look at her historically.

you never met a heretic. Those people will and do any for their god.

I think its a smart move. I think he wants to marry her down the line so getting a loan for something that will mostly benefit her too was smart.

It is a great read and has some fun characters. The story is developing steadily so far in a posit direction. If you have the time to read the I It out.

I rarely fine a cultivation story that I like in this site but this one is a fun read. I love the main character, and the supporting characters. The story is also coming along nicely in my opinion. I can't wait to see how it develops.

One of the best lines I have ever read. Love the the story.

I get that she is link to her, but there is no reason to give out personal and potentially dangerous information to someone that clears is immature and emotional. We have seen her do some really stupid things for dumb reasons. I think at this point it would be wise for her to find a new link that is more level headed and controllable. It should not be that hard. As the requirements to be a link is low. All she has to do is fine a person that will give anything for power or one soft enough to be controlled. She could even raise one in secrets as there is no limit to how far she can go from her link.

This chapter makes no sense. Why does she care what the half elf thinks. She can just go meet the Cryptmaker without her say so. I mean you just establish in this chapter and the previous ones that she can act independently of of her masters. It sound stupid for a master manipulator to give more information about herself to someone that she is using for no benefits.

The cult does not have to be open. I mean she can start in orphanage and recruit the most talented kids she could find. I fought the nobles would care about street rats. The way it could work is that she recruits them in the city and train them in the woods or a hidden place. As long as they don't actively preform any necromancer magic in the city it should be fine. What is the point of having analysis cheat if you don't use it to the best of your ability.

Thank you for the chapter. I have to say the half-elf is annoying. I hope she is not the love interest. I can't fine any good quality to her she is rash and makes stupid decisions after stupid decision. As for the main character it would be smart if you made her plan things out more. I mean for example she could take over the poorest district of this place and make a cult. I mean she can slowly raise orphan children to be necromancers. She could have a lot of back up contractor if the half elf ever dies and she will not be force to relay on one stupid implosive girl to keep her in the living world.

Here is were knowledge play a part. I wonder if she become a werewolf now would she escape the creature. I know werewolf are rare now, but I don't think they all have been cure. I am pretty sure that some people will still want to be a werewolf in the original version like greyback had been.

I think you should have made both her and Naruto into hollows. I think it would be nice to see them born weak and conquering the other hollows. They could have been born fox type. one could have control ice and the other fire. It would make her chaotic behavior funny. it would also make it more interesting for to collect wives from both side.