Ken_Harvick
very good and original in what it respects to unite these worlds what excites me most about your story is jaune and its evolution that you always do well but the potential is great an example would be to leave a little if you want from the plot and make one of your tastes I advise for the eyes of jaune because thanks to jubi you will have them it would be to concentrate more on the rinnegan and the six paths and forget the romance a little, the best thing would be to focus more on jaune first and on jubi as your relationship and interactions evolve for the plot to continue I would advise to go for what you like even if you make many changes to the plot