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C6 I dropped...this bk is great for people, they like it.. Reason I dropped, MC goes after the ICE chick, WHy I hate it? Author could;ve done some OC **** like her secretly helping MC, telling dad to not harm MC dad to much or just do something for him] BUT no, she just a useless ***** and MC accepts her after he beats her up...plus she gets ' interested ' MC after he beats her...yah, the usual slut from cultivation stories. Do understand that this is incredibly bias due me despising the ****ty chick and retarded MC that accepts a worthless chick easily...shallow lovers and relationships are something I despise
Most retarted 260 IQ mc. One chap hes cold to jer because she ignored poor and weak boy But after he got strong shes all over it again and mc didnt even question her and forgive her they slept 2 3 chap later. Shes thot. Dont start bs with she couldnr help bs shes strong enough and power to do it secretly or talk to him but no she ditched him. And our boy cold as iceberg forgive her and gigglimg like fool and scracthing his head like dool in front of her.
I enjoy the plot and the characters, it is rare to actually find a good fanfics about versitile mage. Hell it is even rare to actually find one. The main character is not op at the start making room for character development but also have cheats that improve the mc power extremely fast. He even put his own power levels in the fanfic so the mc has more room to grow. The only downside is the timeline a bit messed up. There would be two downsides since he only writes one chapter a day, but he makes that up by making the chapter long.
Although I like the story I don't like the MC. He is too arrogant, can author please thone down his attitude, because he is becoming annoying. Like when he is running using wind element and knock into a girl, instead of apologizing he mock her instead. It's good too have pride in your abilities, but putting others below you, it's just too much. Make him at least a good person, and not like the typical cultivation novel young master. Where you just mock him he kill you, like in the summons dimension where layda kill another summoner when he mock her master, he can atleast order layda to just break his leg or arms or break his balls, but you kill him immediately. Although the story is good I just don't like the MC attitude, so thats all😀😀
Yeah, Hi author, just making sure. I am having a weird feeling that he would get a harem member earlier than I expected soooooo, would he really get one of his classmates as one? Well if that really is the case then, yeah, no. But that is just my opinion, why? The only reason his girl classmates "like" him is because of his power and his looks which is very cliche in chinese novels so if you really want to add a person to his harem make sure he has some "real development" scene with said person. Please don't add his girl classmates to the harem, it disgusts me, but as I said, own opinion. In regards to the fanfic, it is still great but as I said before, I am in team #NOHAREM so, yeah.
Hello author, I know i am just being selfish but can you assure atleast for me that this won't be a harem and if it is please limit it to 2-3... but i hope it does not come to that. I am just waiting for another semi fluff chapter... yes, I am weird... Oh, in regards to the fanfic, Its good in most cases. I don't mean its bad but i get tired of those familiars/pets transforming loli cliches... They are like little sisters at first then they suddenly become a harem candidate and I am tired of that... But hey its your story minus Quanzhi fashi. Good luck on making this story a good one.
A new and unique story. Because most of the stories about the system so when I saw the story of this novel I finally liked it because I also like the anime and the novel was quite good which I have to say in this fanfic novel. The concept of the magic school has long been almost forgotten by all fans of the novel fanfik, so when I found it I loved it. Please continue with your novel and don't drop it.