GildedGoblin
writing quality- 5 stars, no spelling mistakes as far as I am aware of, the tension build up is amazing and makes you want to read more. story development- 5 stars, it is amazing, the author knows what he is doing, he planned the events step by step through the mc childhood almost like we are there experiencing his life with him character design- 5 stars. very unique I must say, the mc stands out and is different to the cliche popular demand of the uzamaki and uchiha update stability- I dont know I just added it right now world background- story is pretty new as of now and the mc has just gotten out on an adventure so read it and see for yourself
first of all it doesn't make any sense for their to be a new tailed beast. it would have made more sense if someone had sealed the body of the ten tails in to the mc. also I hate to have to point this out but no one in konoha knows anything about puppits he sould have been born in suna I mean it is close to where the body of the ten tails was so it would have made sense form him to make super puppits with wood from the ten tails
very disappointing, when i read the title of the work i thought that finally i would have a fanfic that wasn’t in konoha, the original makes it clear that only the sand village has puppet techniques, but all this was spoiled because again the MC is in konoha, where the same events as 350 fanfic will happen
I gave this 3 star because I think it's so so cliché Like:op ability, konoha Bootliking mc😂😂😂 😂🤣🤣🤣🤣and because he have his own tailed beast🤣🤣😂🤣😂😂🤣😂and I know what fanfic mean it just so cliché that I feel funny🤣🤣🤣😂😂🤣😂and this just my opinion okay read it if you want to I just I think it sososososososososoaoaoao cliché🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂🤣.
this is great story just hope for more frequent updates......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................