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The Origin of the Cosmos

Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System. 1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve. 2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments. 3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again. 4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration. 5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension. 6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast. 7. Will try to add humour. 8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read. 9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add. 10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded. 11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself. Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness. I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord. discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm

omegasensei · Fantasy
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32 Chs

Strangers

"cough.. what is that you want to ask" Nasir.

Jasmine stared at him for sometime she didn't reply him immediately. Nasir tried to evade her eyes more her eyes shined.

"So... in future you will have many dao companions?" Jasmine voiced out softly.

Nasir said scratching his head "Ah... I don't know I don't have anyone I like more than you. Right now we have important issues like the emperor"

While they were discussing in near by city forest a group person landed one of them opened mouth and said "let's contact authorities here on this planet we have to do our work quick and return home"

They in a flash appeared before a city guard and one of them asked "who is the ruler of this planet and where will I be able to find him?"

The guard felt strange dangerous aura taking instinct as support he respectfully said "Our Emperor is the sole ruler of this Chaos desolate planet and he lives in Imperial city which is also called unparallel city"

he continued "even though you guys are powerful I think it will be hard to meet up with the Emperor"

The strangers one of them named Xiao Xun he snorted and said proudly "I am one of the space patrollers in this galaxy your planet is weak so may not know us but I give you a chance don't make us waste our time, we don't want to destroy your planet we don't even have time to do that.

He continued "what is your name you seem smart compared to people we meet in our first contact with planets we visited, quickly contact your superior then his superior till Emperor get going don't waste any more time, you have only two days! don't worry after two days we will directly appear before emperor palace"

"My name is Sahad and please don't worry I will talk all about it to my superiors till it reaches the Emperor" Sahad quickly said.

The Sahad face changed he knew these guys are definitely not ordinary even though he didn't get all of what they said but it's serious he quickly went to meet his brother in law who is deputy general under one of war god.

Soon he arrived before his commander office he saw a quard.

"who is it?" a soldier guard of commander.

"It's me Sahad I want to meet commander please quickly arrange a meeting for me with him tell him his wife's brother want to talk about something" Sahad casually said.

"Oh Sahad how have you been wait, I will ask commander" soldier guard cheerfully said.

"Thank you I am very well hope you are well too" Sahad quickly replied.

After few minutes the soldier guard walk towards him and said "Commander calling you, you can meet him"

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