Reviews of The Night of our Deaths

Author here! I am not here to give myself a shameless 5-star review. I'm going to tell you the good and bad points of this novel and why you should still read this. The female lead: Tachibana Hana, isn't your usual naive and carefree female lead. She's strong and is experienced at killing as she is a member of a dirty organization. But that doesn't mean she is a cold person or she doesn't have a heart. Even though she is a strong and powerful member, she also have her own weak points because she is human. She isn't a Queen of Killing or something. The male lead: Minamoto Haruto, is a real mystery. Romance: This is an action-filled romance. Even so, it's going to be sweet and I really want to show you how our male and female lead's relationship develop. Characters: There would be unique characters and some typical or common characters. They have their own unique points and probably some back stories. You would hate some of them. The plot/novel/story: Since this is an action one, there would be some bloody scenes but there aren't any gore and I wouldn't add any scenes that might be disturbing for the readers. I assure you, this novel would be different from the usual ones that you will read though this was inspired from many novels, fanfics, poems, songs, and such so you might find a few scenes familiar. The bad points: There might be a few plot holes. It's normal. The mystery of the main characters as I won't be reveal everything about them right from the start. I would slowly uncover it and you might be frustrated with that. Aside from that, it feels like the story or novel started from the middle. Even I thought that while writing. You might be confused by it. There are reasons why the characters' personalities, way of thinking, and such are like that. I don't know what are the any other bad points of the novel. Those are only from my point of view, it's different from the author's and from the readers'. If possible, it would be nice that the readers would leave a review. Negative or positive. That would encourage me to improve and do better and give me the motivation to write. That is all.

This novel is not like cliche CEO's novel with a weak MC. Hana is a member of a secret organisation and she's really strong. Her character is refreshing and the male lead brings a sense of mystery in the novel. Moreover, you won't find this type of novel in WN. The author is young but she knows how to write great descriptions, great characters. Good job on this novel!!

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