Su Yu
Let's talk about mc's personality. If you guys can bear it read it. MC is like a child. When he doesn’t have a candy, he will stay silent and pretend that he doesn’t like candy at all. When he gets a candy he will show it around to everyone. look i have a candy but it doesn’t matter to me. He show's that he's low key and modest. People around him praises him such. But how can you be low key when everyone and there grandma knows who you are. If you can bear this or you’ve nothing to read, you can give it a try.
I like the master and disciple theme, but this novel could ruin it, the MC only accepts female disciples and that's not the problem, but it seems that they have all been brainwashed into wanting to just lick the MC ignoring their personalities and just making the reason for their existence to lick the MC, seriously it seems like it was actually written by a person who has never had a loving relationship in his life. about the world of romance: generic no salt, ridiculous advances, and a lot of slap in the face the secondary characters: I skipped the interactions for my mental health finally, read it at your own risk. (my English is my second language, don't notice if it seems a bit "abnormal")
well after read in raw about 100 chaps. The story isnt unique at all. while the first 40-50 chaps are okay. later its just your average typical cn mc. Get the system, get power, find an average enemy, kill enemy, later enemy's friends/family/clan bla bla join in, beautiful female with low IQ getting close to mc. Mc gets arrogant and become magnets for low IQ enemy. Congratulation, this is just PERFECT for lowering IQ readers
Grammar can be improved and about the quality of novel? It's slightly above average, not too bad if you want to read something to pass time. Here you will find arrogant characters, so yeah be prepared for that and lots of face slapping. And cultivation realms are not explained properly and some are even named funny, you will find out what I am talking about when you read.(It's still early, at chapter 20) My final verdict:- You can read it if you don't have anything better, it's slight above average, not that bad so enjoy👍 Reading status:- 20 Chapter
To be honest, I enjoyed the story at first. But as things went on it started to drift away from its main ideas and fall apart. The system kinda just isn't relevant(in a bad way) and the main character doesn't utilize it intelligently. The disciples are all two dimensional and have flat personalities. Nothing interesting about them and they are sidelined too. By chapter 50, everything afterward is mainly focused on generic face slapping villains who are redundant and just waste time to read about. Like there's a huge battle going on and the story ignores it in favor of having a conflict with some guy no one cares about for ten chapters. Not even an exaggeration. Don't recommend reading past chapter 43.