Regarding the new Plot

Hello everyone, I want to let you know that I will be taking the story in a different direction. The original rewrite was meant to rewrite the original story in a way that makes it more understandable and less confusing. 

However, over the following months, I have decided to move away from the original story, to a more downsized one, focused on technology improvement, kingdom building, and more into worldbuilding rather than the story. 

This means I will be removing Rose Valline from the story (for now), and focus on Kant and the small region he is given to rule. This, however, means that a lot of the story has to change and that I may have to rewrite the rewritten chapters again.

This does mean that the entire story that you have read will go into the dumpster. So no large continental war, no terrorist organization trying to puppet the protagonist, and no silly worldbuilding elements. 

However, it DOES mean that you will get to see a richer worldbuilding in this story, more into the politics of how these fantastical states work, and how Kant will industrialize and modernize his land while facing the consequence of inventions of said technology, whether it be good or bad. 

As for the abandoned plot elements, some of them may or may not return in a different book I am currently working on. 

These updates will be rolling around sometime this month. The old chapters will be put up on the Discord server. I will try my best to update the old chapters as much as possible so that I can finally start updating this novel once again.

Now before I go, I want to thank everyone here for sticking with me and this story for so long. It truly warms my heart that there are people here who find my writings to be something enjoyable to read. I hope to see you all soon. 

- Max Lostchild

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