Aeriesu
I am enjoying reading this story and hope that the author continues with more. However, I do not agree with the existing ranking as there are worse stories than this and this one has been enjoyable for the most part. So it will stay in the library for a while. The FL is not boring and the ML is not a turn off, the story does have its funny/interesting moments. However, I do have hope that the story does not drag or go forever and a day. Wishing the author all the best in telling this story.
I like the premise of the story.. It attracted me into staying for 20 chaps or so despite all the grammatical errors. My dear author, I would really recommend for you to do a bit of research to correct your pinyin. Also, to use the dictionary while writing. I've encountered a lot of misused words along with the grammatical errors. My dear, it's not a crime to make mistakes but knowing that you're taking efforts to correct them will gratify your readers. I hope that when I re-read this story some other time, it's already easy on the eyes. Your way of story telling and the story itself has great potential. Cheers to self-improvement!!! (^_^)/