Review Detail of melo_marl in The Magnolia Beauty

I like the premise of the story.. It attracted me into staying for 20 chaps or so despite all the grammatical errors. My dear author, I would really recommend for you to do a bit of research to correct your pinyin. Also, to use the dictionary while writing. I've encountered a lot of misused words along with the grammatical errors. My dear, it's not a crime to make mistakes but knowing that you're taking efforts to correct them will gratify your readers. I hope that when I re-read this story some other time, it's already easy on the eyes. Your way of story telling and the story itself has great potential. Cheers to self-improvement!!! (^_^)/