DaoOfBeauties
Praying to the author, thank you for this novel you have written for your devoted readers. We will read with all our might, promote with all our might, and help you raise through the rankings. Brothers and sisters, let us band together against gods, devils, dragons, hell, and heaven to land at No. 1. Let this pray end. Amen.
Writing Quality - 3/5 - It is a good read but it's painful to read each paragraph. For example, you always wrote in... Smiling wryly, (Name) bla bla bla Next paragraph: Looking at the interface, (Name,) bla bla bla Next paragraph: Sucking a cold bla bla, (Name) bla bla Critics: Next time, change the way you wrote for a better read, cause every paragraph is painful to read because as soon you made a paragraphs every time you made a comma ', ' the next word you wrote is always the mc name or side character name; After the comma making it cringe to read. Stability of update: 5/5 - Not much to say since the author put effort to update every day. Story Development: 4.5/5 - Minus 0.5 for the mc. Character Design: 4/5 - Minus 1 for the misinformation in the early chaps for the character design. I don't want to be racist so let's just wrap it up in mystery. World Background: 5/5- Very Good! ***** Overall: It's a good read, definitely recommended for those wanted a humorous r18 novel. Some paragraph mistakes, typos, and misinformation. But it is still an enjoyable read. Definitely 5/5 for the author for creating such a brilliant work.
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Good story with an βomg this MC is a idiotβ. For a while he is a smart MC with luck with the ladies then he canβt figure crap out a few chapters later. And itβs really bad and obvious. Author leaves giant plot holes all over the place and the MC doesnβt seem to remember anything from more than 3 chapters before. Save your time it becomes crap after a while
Usually, I am totally against harem novels and and novels with perverts as an MC. But this novel is one of a kind! The wish fulfillment with its progress of the plot is simply marvellous. The character development in this novel is one of the best I've seen in cultivation novels. The cultivation systems and the info dump are mostly copied from some famous cultivation novels, but that makes this novel even better. We can the feel some familiarity with this novel since the beginning. This author is a master at constructing and writing chapters that aren't boring to read. It would be awesome if the author of this novel ever tries to write a novel without polygamy, focusing more on romance.