Darkshadow12
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I was talking about the paragraph before this paragraph, which contained MC's 'thought' which the author changed it from 'muttered'.
So basically he is a trap?
Celine be like:
MC:
I don't think I started this 'argument' that u speak of. And to speak about sober, u can never beat a teetotaler like me. And another fact is everyone knows that everything on Webnovel is a fiction. Wat? U also know some non-fiction novels in Webnovel?? And there is a limit to how far a novel can write R-18 chaps. U think someone can escape criticisms after creating se*ual scene with a damn baby?? The characters should be 18+ to be able to be included in se* scenes, a rule that u should know when u write novel in Webnovel. I never even need to argue with a guy like u to begin with. So can u fu**ing stop with ur BS?
Pretty sure it's impossible for a newborn baby to even stand up, and I am definitely sure it's even more hard for its pp to stand up. So can u stop with the "Psychological excitement" thingy?
Definitely not if I am a newborn baby like him
A cheat can't be a cheat forever. The truth always comes out at one point
Tbh, the chapter u deleted seemed more plausible and realistic to me. Now how would he explain why he did it after the sister finds out about s*x?? It would be kinda awkward when he explains it too. So the story book route seemed much better and this kinda seemed little rushed since he didn't even get to finish the book.
"After a few days" doesn't seem right to me. Maybe you should've written "For the last few years". No offense, just a humble opinion