Reviews of The Last Child of Darkness: The Winter Night
The Last Child of Darkness: The Winter Night
CrossArk
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I am the humblest of all authors. So I won’t give you guys any high expectations or something. If you want to read then read. This is meant for some and not for others. If it’s ****, then don’t read. Honestly I need to write more so I can post this so mostly everything I’m saying is blabbering. Enjoy~
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You write very well, the original idea is interesting, but the plot is not well done, the protagonist is not interesting and the relationships are superficial, I feel that you do not know very well the path you will take, I feel that the strength and the MC's personalities are shaped for him to be part of percy jackson's "adventures", there were no character development chapters or training for him to be what he is today, it is as if he did'nt exist before percy entered the camp. The idea of him being a god is interesting, but it is not well explored / developed, as I said before: He is being limited to be part of the "adventures of percy jackson", it is as if he was sleeping for 14 years and just woke up now, only now he will develop: as a person and as a god. I didn't quite understand who the love interest will be, in the first chapters the protagonist seemed very close to Annabeth, but apparently she has feelings for Luke ... I don't know if you are obeying readers' ideas, but what I say is: The novel is yours, do what you want, don't do what some readers want, honestly this part bothered me a lot. I wish the best for the novel, bye.
As much as i love the novel the problem im having with most of crossarks novels are they are either getting dropped or they take forever for updates even after promised steady releases at this point it has turned into check it every two months for maybe a chapter or two i like the concept a lot but the consistency is just a huge issue
There are a few plot holes but I think it's one of the best Percy Jackson fanfic out there. Story is great and all. I just wish he could be more powerful. For God's sake he should even be overpowered for his parents are closed cosmic God and all so he should even have an unkillable body like Kronos. Though overall it's a good read. Expecting for more updates.
