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Throughout Heaven and Earth, I alone am the Honored One.
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Uhm, Isn't kinda overkill using 100x speed or even just multplying the pressure 30 times when you're already stronger than them? The MC is already stronger than Luffy and Zorro but imagine multiplying his speed or even that force by tens of times. They should already be dead when the attack hits them.
It's kinda weird that the MC already plans to kill Azula even before meeting her. I know that her personality is twisted and all but I don't really like self-centered protagonist who thinks they're special and can decide who gets to live and not. Besides, he shouldn't just judge a person based on what he have watched or read. Still, thanks for the chapter.
I think his main ability is just vector manipulation which includes controlling the magnitude or direction of basically everything he touches. So instead of creating vectors from nothing, I think it is more of altering vector which is closer to redirection of basically anything rather than telekinesis (which is just controlling objects from afar with the power of your mind)
Now he even thinks that a rubber quirk can nullify his powers. Dude, Luffy got his own plot armour. But technically, lightning should've just burn of rubber. If he's even weak against rubber, just remove the tag overpowered. The story is good but sorry for my rants. I like OP stories but not this kind of "OP"
Author-san please don't be offended but I think it'll be better if you make Maki serious most of the time and only have her heart flutter or something when something unexpected happen or said. I don't think she's like everybody who's fixated with looks. I think it'll be more like Maki if she's just objectively observing, pondering, and taking care of them like a big sister. Don't rush the romance between them. It's only been a month since they met and they got years to develop their relationship. Just my opinion don't take this so seriously your fanfic is really good. Thanks for the chapterđđ