Reviews of The Invincible Full-Moon System
The Invincible Full-Moon System
Mrboogey13
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- Writing Quality
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- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
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So…I’m on the 17th chapter and while the story’s been great so far, it hasn’t warranted the 5* review I’m currently giving. What warrants this 5* review is my pity towards the author for having to deal with so many readers that don’t pay attention. As I said, I am on chapter 17 and I’ve lost count how many times people have attempted to fix the author’s “errors” for things they didn’t pay attention to. There have been explanations to all stat changes, or lack there of yet these readers constantly believe they know what they are talking about which then leads to further confusion as other readers begin to believe what they say. Sorry author, story’s great and I have plans on catching up, hope you the best.
The Mc is honestly just disgusting he just stands there and watch the supernatural civilians get raped by humans and even lets the humans go and don't get me started on what he did to the assassin siblings, and he acts like humans are the good guys what a hypocrite there is no saving someone as disgusting as hm.
Dialogs are dull, characters are one dimensional and i can't describe how much dumb mc is. He's literally walking through the fire and can't comprehend why the person in front of him is surprised. World background is okay, to some extent it's interesting. Overall i wouldn't recommend it unless author revise it
This novel is... Not great. The grammar Is so painfully bad that I can’t actually read anymore. Mistakes here and there are fine, but literally every sentence takes me out of it. Please if you write a book at least use grammarly or something. Also the writing has been... bad. Often times the author skips foreshadowing and straight up says “something is going to happen” before it happens and without foreshadowing. Its absolutely frustrating.
After reading many werewolves and/or system novels, I decided to give this one as my first review. I've read most of the existing reviews and decided to give my 2 cents. Writing: Yeah, I can see why some people dislike it. The writing at the beginning does justify the negative reviews. I personally didn't mind it as much since I (slowly) skimmed through it. It got better for the later chapters and I can see the author's effort to improve. Regardless, the writing is nothing stellar but not horrible either (for the later parts that is). The use of onomatopoeias is pretty excessive for my liking personally but I understand the author's intention for the tone of the novel to be much more casual. After some amount of re-reading, it certainly has somewhat grown on me. Plot: I think the story is fantastic. It doesn't have a strong start (after the main character got the system). I did not enjoy the school setting very much, but that's just my personal taste. However, things get increasingly more enjoyable as the story advances further. I really like the psychological mind games between the protagonist and the antagonists here, albeit sometimes it gets slightly dragged out a bit. Also, I would love to see some hints or appearances of the werewolf who killed his parents since it was the main antagonist after all. Characters: The main character is the reason why I'm in love with this novel. Sure, he's certainly not the brightest sometimes, but I love everything else about him. Unlike most MCs I came across, he's not some ordinary high school twink who suddenly found supernatural powers. Even before the appearance of the system, the dude was an absolute menace, being in the military force against supernaturals as a normal human. He's very cunning and ruthless, which is extremely fitting for a werewolf. Other than the MC, the females are quite lacking. Harem is not my cup of tea so I'm glad that this one is not too overbearing. World building: The setting is pretty good. The world building is not heavy as it adds bits and pieces as the story goes on through the MC's missions. I really like the war-like atmosphere with a magi-tech world. Overall, while it is not the best, it is certainly very enjoyable. I am currently and will continue to purchase privileged chapters and support the author. PS: If you are dissapointed with this novel, I HIGHLY suggest "The Harvester"
I'll be honest..I have read this novel till chapter 52 and dropped it there because i couldn't bear mc's behaviour anymore..so from my experience.. starting is good..literally good but later mc turns into a simp despite having a tragic past..and got worse and worse in it but if you like a story where mc is a simp..who has no self respect when it comes to beautiful girls..etc...then you might like it.....
After reading up to 300 chapter…It still annoying that author forget reward items from completing the mission. Another thing is development between Mc and Fmc is very bad. Mc already made her female alpha and kiss her once and they go back to same relationship as before. But main thing to offset me is the rewards items. Do not give reward items if you will forget to use it