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Reviews of The Hentai Protagonist System [New Version]

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The Hentai Protagonist System [New Version]

Zakirael

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

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DaoisttG3KuY
DaoisttG3KuYLv1DaoisttG3KuY

bit.ly/3LyRF1N πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

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TempeGoreng
TempeGorengLv4TempeGoreng

what different from old version?? exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

Stefan1266
Stefan1266Lv4Stefan1266

don't drop it and more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

ThisNovelSucksBro
ThisNovelSucksBroLv3ThisNovelSucksBro

I wont waste my time writing a coherent review, in short the MC is a beta c*ckold similar to the author. ---- Reviews are being deleted too as there's no way this has 4 stars.

Kurookami
KurookamiLv2Kurookami

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dippmann
dippmannLv14dippmann

Ummm im kinda confused what was wrong with the other one?? I thought it was perfectly fine and going in a good direction

BumblebeeVsRyu
BumblebeeVsRyuLv4BumblebeeVsRyu

I liked your story but am going have to drop the mc complains about himself way too much and it annoys my soul so much. I stoped at chapter 48

Zakirael
ZakiraelAuthorZakirael

Just shameless self pomotion. Just ignore [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

48ba
48baLv448ba

I have a good time reading it. It have a unique writing as I am also writing a FF. By the way I have to ask this as I am curious πŸ˜…. What's the sauce or Name of the Girl in the Cover Photo. It's for research purposes πŸ˜….

Freak_g_s
Freak_g_sLv4Freak_g_s

Liked the start of the story a bit, but after the system changed and the chapter with the gods I really started disliking this story. The system change I thought was lazy writing. And the chapter with the gods was actually useless, it was super vague and nothing was explained about their intentions or what the point of the system was. The lemons aren’t great, I don’t think the Mc is written well, he doesn’t do much. I don’t think this story has much going for it

ImAlwaysRightKEKW
ImAlwaysRightKEKWLv1ImAlwaysRightKEKW

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saed_saeed
saed_saeedLv4saed_saeed

why is MC despite having his memories stutters in front of his new family and act like a lost poppy in front his father? it's so irritating that I want to bash someone's head

DaoistgsudiX
DaoistgsudiXLv3DaoistgsudiX

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Tamae_Reborn
Tamae_RebornLv10Tamae_Reborn

nice,keep going. just kill old man bastar and steal gilr i too want shiboraretai with oneeee-sannnn[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Deyego
DeyegoLv13Deyego

I wait!!! Come back and write moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

I love the story and I hope the author keeps up the good work. The only problem is the update speed, I wish it was faster.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜

TrAnSfOrMeR
TrAnSfOrMeRLv4TrAnSfOrMeR

don't drop this novel author, this novel is very well written and with a good concept.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

ArturiaSimp
ArturiaSimpLv3ArturiaSimp

UmU I'll add this to my smut collection 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

Sommerscave
SommerscaveLv14Sommerscave

Reveal spoiler

SparkHyperion
SparkHyperionLv3SparkHyperion

One of my favorite stories on this site, I hope the author continues with the good work and that this story is long. If you like stories that have hentai characters I recommend giving it a try.