Review Detail of TempeGoreng in The Hentai Protagonist System [New Version]
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The Hentai Protagonist System [New Version]
Zakirael
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author-sama can you make the mc a bit more like Yuki from the akikan ff so your mc is more of a Chad with a lot of bravery and opness
Zakirael:the differences will appear in a few chapters
I agree with Kirito_Kirigaia I think what made me not want to keep reading was the mc, I feel that if he becomes more confident and aggressive(In a good way) I think more will like the new version!!
Zakirael:the differences will appear in a few chapters
Aggressive like being the one to hold her hand, give her a kiss, make an innuendo type joke, teasing, inviting her to dates,being jealous when guys take it to far, that type of aggressive.
TravelerZeroZer4:I agree with Kirito_Kirigaia I think what made me not want to keep reading was the mc, I feel that if he becomes more confident and aggressive(In a good way) I think more will like the new version!!
Is the MC going to let Anna go to the club and watch her do those things with other men like last time? (I'll be honest and admit that I haven't read this fic before because I read in the comments that this happened)
Zakirael:the differences will appear in a few chapters
What comments? Anna only watched other people do those "things" and didn't participate in any of them, she didn't do anything with other men in the previous version of this fanfic except with the MC. I maybe reading your comments wrong so feel free to tell me.
AleccrimD:Is the MC going to let Anna go to the club and watch her do those things with other men like last time? (I'll be honest and admit that I haven't read this fic before because I read in the comments that this happened)image
Well, from what I remembered Anna masturbated away from people and didn't masturbated in front of people. After that, the MC came and relieved her then she reached nirvana (private room not on the public part of the club.) You don't have to worry about this new version as the MC isn't gonna be as passive as the previous version. He is more active and could not compare to his old version. Just try the fanfic.
AleccrimD:Is the MC going to let Anna go to the club and watch her do those things with other men like last time? (I'll be honest and admit that I haven't read this fic before because I read in the comments that this happened)image
Great_Young_Master:Well, from what I remembered Anna masturbated away from people and didn't masturbated in front of people. After that, the MC came and relieved her then she reached nirvana (private room not on the public part of the club.) You don't have to worry about this new version as the MC isn't gonna be as passive as the previous version. He is more active and could not compare to his old version. Just try the fanfic.
No problem, my fellow man of culture. Hopefully, there won't be anything bad that's gonna happen to your little brother soon. However, if there would be bad that'll happen to your little brother then I won't forget you and I'll inherit your will of D!
AleccrimD:Thank you brother, you eased my mind a lot. Now I can read the fic without worry.image
