As father walked in my room, a pretty girl was coming along with him. At first I didn't recognize her but as I looked her carefully, Minhi's father told him that her name Rizuna and she will be serving him from then on.
His father got out of the room. Minhi was so angry when he saw Rizuna but calmed down after all it wasn't her fault. Minhi thought "I need to behave well this time or I would have the same fate as before!".
He smiled and said "My wish is your command. Do you have any objection?" Rizuna politely said "No". He then told her that the main maid will tell her what to do.
He made the decision that he would do everything to live this second life successful!
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