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Ur structure is horrible bro, dont sperate the sentences into different paragraphs. As for the story, reading about it, i assumed MC would be a 4000 yr old genius, but the story, the MC more of a kid. I would've assumed since he is practically hated by everyone and is alone that he'd plan and stay hidden or something, but this is more or less like the the usual stories where the SI MC gains power, attains a majestic presence and begins to face slap everyone. nothing wrong but I expected something different with a smarter MC that plans or something
I like this type of story so it is best for me. Updates are also good and development of MC is going in nice pace. ********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Volume 1 is fantastic. Must read so to say. Volume 2 is horrendous and proof that the author is overwhelmed by his own creation. Chaotic, unnecessary, repetitive content, characters and progression. Don't want to spoiler, but don't believe anything from the last chapters of volume 1 and don't hope for a great development of things. Thus, no recommendation, because it became a rip-off containing only filler stories, characters and nothing really matters in the long run. MC has barely any progression, goes against his own ideals and words all the time and lost everything that made him a great character to follow. Dropped and not picking up again.
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