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The concept of the story is great and interesting. The downsides are wrongly used gender terms and at times master yoda like speach. The only downside to the story is the side stories that occur at in opportune moments and disrupt the flow and buildup of the story at crucial moments. I'm also not very interested in these side stories as they feel irrelevant. One such example is the pov from his companions about something that just happened. I'm simy not interested in reading things twice or reading about events in the far past that don't really apply to the situation at hand. Still the story is quite good when you get past the grammar and side stories. Good enough that I rate it as I do, regardless of the things I mentioned. Honestly speaking, if it didn't have the side stories and had perfect grammar, I would have been willing to rate it 5 stars. And I'm a bit of a hard ass for when it comes to ratings, rarely do I rate more than 3... So the story or atleast the concept is quite good, interesting and amusing for me to rate it 4 stars.