introduction of First incarnation of a omnipotent entity and The God.. Ch 1

Your story is quite intriguing! However, I noticed a few mistakes that need to be corrected for clarity and coherence. Here are the suggested changes: "As a Man of Lineage, he views everything in the Divine Creator's will as a dream or non-existence. He perceives all creations, realities, universes, and the immeasurable Reality as non-existent. His first and primal incarnation exists beyond space and time, in the space beyond space and beneath space. His ego, which is made from a piece of The Divine Will of both evil and good, exists outside of space or time, in nowhere and nothingness. The aspects of his consciousness exist in a notional place, neither real nor unreal. The primal truths compose every aspect of both evil and virtue, with both sides having the same quantity, although the evil side is the densest. Even the leakage of his dream itself created a place like Hell, creatures like demon lords, and every monster with an evil side in existence. He is the beginning of all creation, created by his first Creator, far away from any possible dimensions and Space-Time, beyond the reach of demon lords, heroes, and even Gods. Time passed by, and the devil's evil side transcended his virtuous side at an immeasurable speed, which started affecting the Gods' creations that he loved most. After a long time, he reached the conclusion to seal the power of his first creation, which would surely become close to him or equal to him. The size of his consciousness is immeasurable, and he is also a closely omnipotent entity, but The God, the all-powerful entity, managed to seal it away easily. This turned him into a transcendent life form that looked like the most beautiful life form ever seen, with long silver-white hair and the most beautiful blue eyes, capable of easily seducing both women and men. He was named Zadd and blessed directly by The God. He wasn't bound by the fates of other gods; he could become a hero, villain, or god. Time didn't follow him; he followed time entirely. There's only a single him, and he can't be seen in multiple timelines. Both physical and magical laws, as well as cause and effect, aren't even a consideration for him. However, he lost his memory as the first Devil or demon, and his evil side was sealed away, along with his absolute power. The God created an immeasurable number of Gods, each transcending the other. For a lower god, a higher god's power is infinite, but for a higher god, it's finite power to a lower god. Each God is capable of creating an immeasurable amount of reality, with each reality containing countless dimensions, multiverses, universes, and sub-atomic particles with their own universes and gods. Each containing different laws, cause and effect, galaxies, black holes, and more. However, Zadd sees them as insignificant. The first devil traveled to many realities, even meeting other gods, but he ignored most of them as they were insignificant to him. Time passed by, and countless worlds were destroyed, yet he remained alive. Zadd then reached the most interesting reality where demons, humans, and gods were constantly at war. The planet was the size of a big star, with Gods who held authority over certain concepts, such as nature and time-space, and demons who were more like transcendent humans. The demon lords controlled them, while the gods lived in the continent of supernaturalism. There were humanoid creatures like dragonoids, ogres, goblins, giants, etc., living on the monster continent. In the Dragon continent, dragons capable of changing into humanoid form lived, comparable to gods in power. They could change entire terrains based on their elemental nature. In the continent of spirits, beings lived peacefully and hidden from other continents. It was only a spiritual existence, not physical. Lastly, there was the continent of magic and art, including dwarfs, elves, and other magical creatures. While watching, Zadd came to the conclusion that this world had the potential to entertain him and cure his boredom. He contemplated destroying the gods and implementing a God of his liking, showing the pretenders of gods and demon lords what a real God is like."...

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