Drei05
Everyone thanks for the support! Expect thay I will try my best to make the story even better. Also, if you have any thought about my work, just comment it! I honestly enjoy and feel happy reading other's comment to my novel! And please if you can, I would really appreciate if you leave a honest review about my work. ⊂( ̄(エ) ̄)⊃
writing quality isn't the worst but far bellow the standards of what the rating of the book would suggest, basically reviews seem lil fake 😅 honestly just barely better than some mtl novels that webnovel puts out. story development is very weird at times, there is no pace to it, stuff just happens without a good reason, basically a lot of forced plots just because you as the author can do it i guess. I guess it's due to being an inexperienced author and it's hard to make that plot development seem more natural you, idk... probably know about this problem yourself. characters are honestly bad... like they aren't even budget author pov's copies, copies so bad that it's insulting to the originals. Ye I said it, might seem harsh but that's the reality of things, you have 30+ reviews telling you how good the book is, but it's not.... not even close. the idea it self is good but execution is way off I could go in deeper but I won't lol, maybe will check this book out again in the far future and write another review 🥱
Probably one of the best novel, i read. I love the character as he kinda have relatable trait with me or even with other. While the system is good too, remind me of Raphael in Tensura (slime). But, talking about the writing style, this is surprisingly simple but caught all the detail i need. adding this into my collections, couldn't wait you update it, i just read 4 but i will do it more later. Good luck author!
I had a lot of fun reading the first 15 chapters(will make a new review once there are more). For starter’s the mc isn’t an edge lord or psychopath freak, just a smart and collected guy who likes the charm stat. Mc finally doesn’t use a cliche weapon and is also to look cool doing it. for world background and carachter design, it could be better , with more descriptions and depth, but just the Mc makes the story worthwhile. 5 stars!.
I should have made a review when I first saw this hidden gem but I was to entranced by the beauty of this story! An MC that won't follow the son of fate like a lost puppy and would give up his chances of power to the fated one, I love it! Raven is by far my most favorite character out of all the transmigrated/reincarnated Author Extra's. I'm sick and tired of MC's like Ren Dover or Kim Hajin always protecting the child of prophecy, like they're heroes!! They can protect themselves, due to hiding their power, they even allow teachers, students, basically everyone to mock and insult them because they are "weak", even 6 months of suffering didn't change Ren and that's sad, worry about yourself first, like a powerful and wise warrior once said, "Close your heart to their desperation, close your heart to their suffering, do not allow yourself to feel for them, they will not feel for you."
This is definitely a good read. Being pulled into your own novel? now that's some thrilling kick-ass book right here . The character design is stable, and the story development is quite good too. Though the author still needs to work on the writing quality for it is essential , but overall this novel is a hit!
Hey author, I must say, you're developing a lot more than the first time! I can see your dedication and passion. Your plot is indeed unique, but the character is quite blah(reminds me of Saiki Kun). I don't normally read system stories but this kept me coming for more! The world building could be a bit faster but not going to complain about that, seen worse. Overall, it's great!