Arnin, dead?

Immortal Elyon departed the Hall of Fate, his determination guiding him toward the Hall of Time and Space. Architecturally similar, yet distinctly different, the hall's entrance sparked trepidation. Concealing himself behind a pillar, Elyon hesitated.

Fortune smiled as he spotted Kael, an immortal acquaintance from heaven. "I require assistance," Elyon whispered urgently as he walked to him. "I must witness someone's past."

Kael nodded sympathetically, leading Elyon through hidden passages into an empty chamber. Seated oppositely in lotus position, their flowing white garments enveloped the ground. Softly rustling hair framed their serene faces.

Elyon transmitted memories, fingertips touching his forehead. Kael received the light, eyes illuminating. "Follow me."

Intertwining palms, gathering essence, Elyon closed his eyes. Reality blurred.

Soon after ,Immortal Elyon and the other immortal opened their eyes.They found themselves in a place that looked like a war happened.it was during a day time.

There was buildings on fire,smoke ,dead bodies on the ground,and blood smeared at different places.

The two immortals followed the  light and it led them to a pile of dead bodies on the ground .

Then suddenly the light stopped moving,and suspense on the air above a body.

The two immortals walked to the light and saw the dead body of a little boy.

"Is he dead too?" Immortal Elyon asked curiously,as he wondered why the memory of Arnin would come to a dead body.

The other immortal crouched then,he held the child's wrist and felt his purse.

Immortal Elyon eagerly waited for an answer.

After the other immortal checked his purse,he dropped his hand and stood up.

"He's dead" he said as he looked at immortal Elyon.

"Then is he...a ghost?" Immortal Elyon asked.

"We can't be__" the other immortal was talking but then he stopped as he felt a powerful aura.

"You feel it too,don't you?" Immortal Elyon said as he looked around.

Then immediately,they opened their eyes and they were back to the hall of time and space.

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Immortal Elyon and Kael opened their eyes, beholding ravaged landscapes: burning buildings, smoke-choked skies, lifeless bodies and blood-soaked earth. They trailed the ethereal light, navigating through carnage.

As they approached a gruesome pile, the light halted, suspending tension above a youthful corpse. Elyon's curiosity intensified.

The two immortals walked side-by-side, their deliberate strides harmonious.

Reaching the lifeless child, Elyon's expression reflected bewilderment. "Is he dead too?" he queried, pondering Arnin's memory connection.

Kael crouched, gentle fingers wrapping the child's wrist. His scrutinizing gaze locked onto Elyon. After verifying lifelessness, Kael dropped his hand, standing upright. Their eyes met.

"He's dead," Kael confirmed solemnly.

Elyon's intrigue deepened. "Then...is he...a ghost?"

Kael hesitated, sensing ominous energy. His voice trailed. "We can't—"

A powerful aura enveloped them. Elyon whispered, "You feel it?" Eyes scanning, tension mounted.

Instantly, they reopened their eyes within the Hall of Time and Space.

Immortal Elyon's expression darkened, frustration and perplexity etching his resilient face. "Senior, why did you abruptly sever our profound connection? The unfolding events seemed pivotal, cryptic, and ominous."

Kael's bewilderment mirrored Elyon's, intensifying his curiosity. "I didn't disrupt our symbiotic link," he protested, shaking his head fervently as he wondered how he got blocked.

"That potent, foreboding aura, thick with malevolent intent, must have mysteriously intervened."

Elyon's determination intensified, driven by intrigue. "Let's try it again  immediately, utilizing harmonized energies."

Repeated, exhausting attempts yielded failure, inducing gruesome, bloody coughing fits. Exhaustion and frustration etched their immortal faces.

Kael wiped his bloodied lips, scrutinizing Elyon. "The memory blocker's exceptional skill is alarming, unprecedented, and masterful. How did they detect our subtle intrusion?"

Elyon rose, blood smudging his mouth and elegant, ethereal garments. "I knew it."

Kael's curiosity deepened, fueled by suspicion. "Why was checking this person's memory important,who is he ?"

Elyon smirked , concealing his true intentions. "Another immortal sought clarity; my abilities faltered that was why I seemed an assistance."he lied.

Kael's suspicions lingered, unanswered, heightening tension.

"I'm grateful for your assistance,Kael.I must be on my way now," Elyon  said,as he walked away ,disappearing into the misty, mystical distance.

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IN ESSED

After cautious deliberation, the group resolved to visit Meiyer's majestic estate. Abandoning their scattered carriage, they mounted horses, riding harmoniously toward laon Manor.

Arriving, they dismounted, captivated by the manor's ominous facade. A solemn, silver-plated plaque emblazoned the entrance: "Purify." Exquisitely crafted bells adorned the doorway and gateway.

Prince Kahne's curiosity sparked. "What mystical significance do these enigmatic bells hold?"

Arnin smirked confidently, folding arms. "These sacred bells detect malevolent entities, safeguarding occupants.

Mortals pass unnoticed, while demonic presence triggers instantaneous, synchronized ringing. The bells' harmonious resonance serves as an alarm, alerting guardians within."

Ningtin nodded appreciatively. "Your profound knowledge impresses."

Meiyer scoffed dismissively. "Basic demonology. Nameless knew this before his memory loss."

" I also know about it"lady pherna said, pouting.

Arnin grinned as he looked at lady pherna ,then he spoke," ladies first.lady pherna Take the honour to go in first." he said as he motioned.

Lady pherna sneered,"do you think I'm a demon or what?"

"Don't get me wrong ,my lady ,I never said you were a demon" Arnin said.

"I'll go first,there is no need for any of us to hesitate,is it not?" Prince khane said as he was about to walk but then arnin walked faster,overstepping him

"No need,I'll go in first." He said as he walked to the door.He looked at the bells with a grin  and then he pushed the wooden gates open and walked in.The bells didn't ring

When he went in,he turned around and placed his hand on his waist,"waiting for you all.I and khailian have somewhere to be soon." he said.

Prince khane went in next and it didn't ring.

" Who is Khailian?"meiyer asked.

" It's also nameless."lady pherna said as she walked in.

" And nameless is also prince khane."Ningtin said as he walked in and lady meiyer followed him with a surprised face.

" What?"