Deathseeker
Don't like it! Firstly what the heck is he? I mean when he appears in Skyrim the soldiers don't react to him realistically. You should have made him appear at least like one of the native Tamriel species rather he looks like a freak of nature between humanoid and Argonian. Lastly, he is too tolerant, I mean he tells the jarls not to judge all vampires as evil? WTF HAHA. Vampires a fu*king apex predators plus THE spawn of Malag Bal, genociding them shouldn't be a problem but boon to the world.
Hey author! I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you're looking for power stones or gems, I can tell you I don't have extra I am a cheap person... but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you drop this novel go now, that will not be the end of it - I will not only look for you, I will not only pursue you... but if you do drop this, I will look for you, I will find you... and I will kill you...kimosabe...
If you like to think everyone is nice, everyone should be nice, everyone deserves a second chance, everyone trusts you if you're nice, and other hilariously beautifully unrealistic things you can tell yourself, this is for you. I skipped the story of ff14 because i hated this exact thing. Not a fan of such childish naivety
I rarely, almost never review any novel, but here I have made an exemption, and must say that this is an absolute hidden gem. Elder Scrolls fanfics are exceptionally rare, not to mention crossover ones that are very well written. This fanfic is one of the best novels I have ever read, it has extensive Kingdom Building element and World Building. For Crossover, suitable worlds were chosen, namely Dragon Age and Witcher World, which is the perfect choice, once again, you rarely see good fanfics on these worlds.
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Amazing work and a good read, the idea makes me want to create a mod for skyrim using this story hell it would make a great play. My complaint is the grammar and word flops, like "he handled a two handed and swings it around" the weapons name is ommitted and other examples as well, other than that this is a great story
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