Paranoias
Holy bajeezus... Firstly, man this story is really good. The pacing can benefit by adding a few spaces in between people speaking thanks to some of their names, but other than that, the amazing worldbuilding and story can really hook you in! Really cannot wait to read more and hope I'd reach the same level of writing as this one
Extremely. Well. Thought. Of. Each Dukedom, Marquisate or any location you have in mind, you name it, the author's got it all planned. Each location is extremely detailed, you can clearly imagine the scene where the current cast is in. The explanation of the scenery around them is very well written that you'd actually feel like you're in the scene itself. Overall: You'd lose yourself in a trance when reading this novel, guaranteed. This is a MUST read, if you're a huge fan of historical romance then this one is perfectly for you. Each chapter is written so well that you'd keep craving and craving for the next one. GIVE IT A READ AND YOU WONT REGRET IT.
FASCINATING AND INTRIGUING!! I was so hooked up with the prologue. so far, among the romances that I have read, draws the readers on its unique plot. The author very knows well how to make readers want more of the novel. I love this! I cannot see any problems aside from the changes on how the characters were addressed. It just gets mixed up with my memory is all
The story is emotional. I can feel the pang of sorrow in my heart as I read it. The author did a good job in portraying how a father loves his children and the bond of two young siblings is very well defined too. The scene description also provides you a vivid picture as you imagine the story in your mind. The only two things that kind of irked me were the name transitions. It is okay for royalty to have a long name, but I would prefer to read the name which is simple enough to remember. I hope the author won't kill me. I am looking forward to the future chapters.
Love that I'm the first reviewer đ€© Anyways, there are just few problems I have with the novel. The first one is that the name is extremely hard to remember or vocalize, I have hard time reasing the names here sheesh. I recommend to simplify the names you use here Author-nim!! Aside from the names, everything's doing good so keep up the good work author and fighting!