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The Dawn Of Time

In the world right beneath their feet what lies there is not hell nor haven but a place of tragedy and despair known as valdimor

Jace_Wukong · Realistic
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Realization

 I see my sister the first thing I do is hug her and tell her I love her I say I love you Irene she stares at me intensively surprised for those words to come out my mouth. She ignores me and sighs under her breath she then begins to speak she utters the words go take your shower.

I get a feeling of Deja vu then I remember how I got here it all happened when I saw Arthur as soon as I saw him.

I heard his deep overpowering voice does he know I'm here? does he know my goal does he know about the agency. I see his neck tilt in the opposite direction I sigh a sigh of relief a sigh of accomplishment.

I am on top of the world until I see two holes appear in the back of his head our eyes meet in my head; I tell myself to run but I can't move not because I'm fascinated not because I'm sad or depressed but be I froze in fear everything goes quiet the only thing I hear is my own breath and sense is my own breath.

 Arthur begins to speak he utters the words hello David, I can't hear him he begins to rant about how he knew about the organization saying he knew about our plan he knew about the future he knew about our purpose he knew our deepest and darkest desires.

My ears pop bang thud I can hear Auther he says I know about the fact that I'm close to my goal as soon as I ingest these words I freeze once again but this time I can hear. He says what are your final words although I can't bring myself to say I say die you bastard you good for nothing swine, he can't hear me, but I know I have expressed my feelings. Arthur finishes by saying it's over all of a sudden, the ground starts to shake you can fell the rumbling you can feel something thudding almost like the beat of a heart or a trumpet you hear Arthur scream he says it's too much its overwhelming then I hear a bang and I wake up in my sister's bed.

 

 I get up to take my shower and now that I have recovered my memories, I think to myself my sister died nine years ago how is she still here. Then it dawns on me what year is this what day is this I get out of the shower I check the day and year it says 2083 my heart beats faster than ever before I feel adrenaline it is one week before my sister dies.

I think to myself I realize I warped back in time I mean it makes sense and I have to admit it to myself I say thank you to that long face bastard named Arthur because of his wretched self it made a link through time leading me here.

My eyes sparkle at the opportunity to be able to save my sister. Ding dong I hear the doorbell ring i take my stance ready to fight then I realize I don't have to for the apocalypse has not yet happened.

The door opens its my mom she sees my butt naked with no clothes on she covers her eye and shouts David put some clothes on! 

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