Reviews of The Buried Star
The Buried Star
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TheSpixaLv1TheSpixa
I really liked how you try to show Your character’s thoughts and feelings. However, there were some minor issues you struggled with such as grammatical, punctuational errors and how you struggled to ‘show’ the readers the unfolding of the story. Otherwise, the story was superb!!
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