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The Blessed or The Cursed? [PREVIEW]

[NOTE] THIS VERSION OF THE NOVEL HAS BEEN DROPPED DUE TO LACK OF PLANNING. (BASED SOLELY OFF A DREAM) IT WILL BE REWRITTEN WITH ACTUAL STORY BEHIND IT AND PROPER MOTIVATIONS. TAKE THIS VARIANT AS A TASTE OF WHAT IS SOON TO COME. Cauld Facility - A play on words, but not for the fact that the facility itself is cold - It's because of something far worse. In this world, there is a chance, albeit a low one, that a person who's born will gain an 'ability.' These ability-holders are called 'Blessed', simply because their ability is always unique and because they cannot be explained. These children are taken under the guise that they will be protected under the 'Lord's gaze' where in reality, they will be trained. By no means is this any normal training. Cauld Facility - Or in other words - Cold Facility. A dead, emotionless facility where feelings don't last long. This is undoubtedly the fate of all of these so-called 'Blessed.' However, what if one of these poor souls woke up? Realised the situation? Understood what was going on? Will he go mad? Will he break down? Will he end his life? We follow the story of Ryn. A boy who should've never woken up. - NAME UPDATE - Changed from Blessed and Cursed to The Blessed or The Cursed? (Because there's lots of blessed and cursed variants) - Novel Update Schedule - 2x chapters per day at the minimum. Depending on my mood, could be more.

SoullessWendigo · Fantasy
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Continue or Drop?

I've been writing this novel by both improvisations and having various goals in mind (e.g. future scenes and building up to them)

The thing is, I'm not exactly sure whether this novel is worth continuing or not. It's fun to write, but I just can't tell whether it's good not. It's not obvious to me, the Author, because I'm obviously going to be biased, so I'm relying on whoever bothers to read this to tell me.

In case it wasn't obvious, my self-esteem is utter crac when it comes to this type of stuff.

Well, yeah, that was it. If there aren't any comments or anything relevant in the next few days, then I'll just drop the novel.

What do you think? Drop or continue?

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