Reviews of The Black Pearl

Give it a read guys and show some love! Follow Demi on her adventure, she is such an interesting character, I am sure you'll just love her! The author paints vivid scenes!

Nice story. till now the aUthor has set a Steady pace. I wonder wHat will happeN next? Though i would have liked The author to explain more on the eight kingdoms and how they came to be, it doesnt deter the focus from the female lead. a few minor flaws here and there, but overall an interesting read. i would recommend this one to those who like a strong frmale lead in a good fantasy

The plot has intrigued me to keep reading. Besides on that fact, the strong female lead is sure as fiesty one and was no novice on her fighting skills. However, there are some few certain dialogue that didn't fit out of my expectations. Some are too hasty and cringey but still turned out fine. I would like you to fix some of that and also, the story flow was getting interestingm I'm looking forward for the next chapter ^^

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I love how the sypnosis intrigues me and is pulling me to read more! I must say, keep writing as your writing style caught my interest. I'll be willing to wait for more updates❤❤

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Firstly I’d say the synopsis is mind blowing, it caught my attention and I’d love to read more. Good job Author, Id be back as a spoiler😂😂

Apart from grammatical errors, the story looks good. it is too short for a review, so i can't say much about it. I would give a higher rating if i had read more of the story, but for now, i feel it is a good story worth reading.

The story is very compelling right from the beginning, the dialogue synopsis, everything intrigued me. Though there are grammatical errors, it didn't stop me from flowing with the story. And I'm sure with a little editing the story will flourish even more than it has, kids to the author. This is a definite read.👍

If you look beyond the simple independent clauses, the story weaves in a plot slowly that emphasizes the fighting spirit of the main character. She puts herself in harms way in hopes of protecting the defenseless.

Great book I must say, the language description of things around is quite intriguing and the writer was able to explain each scenario they played out. Nice work.

nice story author, it is really a fantasy. Even though Demetria was keeping to be a hard worker she can be just like a fantasy warrior. keep up the good work!

You have a good story coming. I am interested to learn more about this female protagonist in the mystery behind this man named river. You're writing style has great detail which allows me to imagine what is going on. Great work for the author; I cannot wait to read more.