Miss_Romance
Thank you everyone for the reviews and for the love and for allll the pieces of advice ! It's my first attempt writing and I hope everyone enjoys my story ! ❤ if there are any grammar or syntax errors then please feel free to express your opinion in comments ! Keep reading and keep motivating me to write more ❤❤❤ Ps: if you like this story then check my new one ! Thank you everyoneeee XOXO ❤❤❤
Well I must say I was very much engrossed in it. I Loved all the characters. All the chapters were beautifully written and presented. I loved the storyline. The description of the hero and heroine was quite satisfying. It felt like a comic book while reading. I could actually imagine their faces. I liked the negative characters. Also, there is a very spicy and sexy thing about this story and about all the characters. I loved the twists and turns in the plot.
The storyline had potential and the characters were showing a decent amount of growth, but the dialogue between characters is awkward. Other moments and internal thoughts are cringy and at times uncomfortable to read . Story had potential but due to linguistic choices I am not continuing the story further